Parallel structure
A three-year-old boy has a dream to be a superhero in the cartoon.
A three-year-old girl has a dream to live in the house made of the sweets.
A twenty-year-old man has a dream to be a soccer player.
A twenty-year-old woman has a dream to be a nurse.
A thirty-year-old man has a dream to be a president of the company.
A thirty-year-old woman has a dream to get married with a handsome guy.
A sixty-year-old man has a dream to retire and spend time reading the books.
A sixty-year-old woman has a dream to spend more time with her husband.
Everyday, every night, every moment, people all over the world are hoping to come true their dreams.
posted by Nana @ 12:49 PM
3 Comments:
Nana, I love how you approached this poem! You combined two ideas we discussed in class (men vs. women, children vs. adults) and made a creative poem. Be careful with your spelling of "guy."
That's really nice poem!!!
I guess every one have a kind of dream, and it doesn't matter how old they are.
I'm fascinated by your poem!! I really like it☆ To have dream and make efforts to be come true is wonderful and important thing for us♪ The faces when people tell their dreams are shining even if they are children or adults.
Anyway, what is your dream??(w
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